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		<title>Comment on Character Flaws by wintercarmindi</title>
		<link>http://jessicadall.com/2012/08/29/character-flaws/#comment-501</link>
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		<pubDate>Fri, 07 Sep 2012 21:01:26 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[Thank you, this is very helpful. I enjoyed reading this. :)]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Thank you, this is very helpful. I enjoyed reading this. <img src='http://s0.wp.com/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_smile.gif' alt=':)' class='wp-smiley' /> </p>
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		<title>Comment on Novel Blogs by tropicalblender</title>
		<link>http://jessicadall.com/2012/04/05/novel-blogs/#comment-499</link>
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		<pubDate>Sat, 01 Sep 2012 02:45:32 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[I am truly wondering what the market is for fiction. There seems to be so much out there today. Although I love to write it, I tend to think my non-fiction works may sell better.]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I am truly wondering what the market is for fiction. There seems to be so much out there today. Although I love to write it, I tend to think my non-fiction works may sell better.</p>
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		<title>Comment on You can&#8217;t write that! by Jessica Dall</title>
		<link>http://jessicadall.com/2012/08/21/you-cant-write-that/#comment-495</link>
		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Jessica Dall]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 21 Aug 2012 19:57:48 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[Exactly. Sometimes a story is best served with a passing mention of something that might make some people queamish, sometimes a full scene, sometimes nothing at all. It&#039;s when a book turns into nothing but gross/uncomfortable scene that seem to have no point is there a serious issue in my opinion. Don&#039;t like torture porn movies, don&#039;t like torture porn books.]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Exactly. Sometimes a story is best served with a passing mention of something that might make some people queamish, sometimes a full scene, sometimes nothing at all. It&#8217;s when a book turns into nothing but gross/uncomfortable scene that seem to have no point is there a serious issue in my opinion. Don&#8217;t like torture porn movies, don&#8217;t like torture porn books.</p>
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		<title>Comment on You can&#8217;t write that! by Allyson Marrs</title>
		<link>http://jessicadall.com/2012/08/21/you-cant-write-that/#comment-494</link>
		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Allyson Marrs]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 21 Aug 2012 19:47:51 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[Stieg Larrson&#039;s wildly famous &quot;Girl with the Dragon Tattoo&quot; had many rape scenes. And while they were difficult, and sometimes disturbing, to read, it moved the plot forward and helped the reader sympathize and understand Lisbeth&#039;s actions. In situations like these, real life horrors work well in novels. But if there&#039;s no point beyond shocking the reader, definitely cut it.]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Stieg Larrson&#8217;s wildly famous &#8220;Girl with the Dragon Tattoo&#8221; had many rape scenes. And while they were difficult, and sometimes disturbing, to read, it moved the plot forward and helped the reader sympathize and understand Lisbeth&#8217;s actions. In situations like these, real life horrors work well in novels. But if there&#8217;s no point beyond shocking the reader, definitely cut it.</p>
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		<title>Comment on Novel Blogs by Jessica Dall</title>
		<link>http://jessicadall.com/2012/04/05/novel-blogs/#comment-477</link>
		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Jessica Dall]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 08 Aug 2012 13:56:02 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[Exactly. To most publishers, up to three chapters of a full length work is no big deal. It&#039;s a good thing to get people interested in your books (most books have at least an excerpt up online) publishers for the most part just don&#039;t want to lose potential readers who have already had the chance to get the book somewhere else (perhaps for free). If you only post a little of your book, you shouldn&#039;t have a problem.]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Exactly. To most publishers, up to three chapters of a full length work is no big deal. It&#8217;s a good thing to get people interested in your books (most books have at least an excerpt up online) publishers for the most part just don&#8217;t want to lose potential readers who have already had the chance to get the book somewhere else (perhaps for free). If you only post a little of your book, you shouldn&#8217;t have a problem.</p>
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		<title>Comment on Why You Need to Pay Your Ghostwriter by Jessica Dall</title>
		<link>http://jessicadall.com/2012/07/03/why-you-need-to-pay-your-ghostwriter/#comment-476</link>
		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Jessica Dall]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 08 Aug 2012 13:52:46 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[Thanks, I&#039;m glad you do!]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Thanks, I&#8217;m glad you do!</p>
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		<title>Comment on Why You Need to Pay Your Ghostwriter by Ghost Writer</title>
		<link>http://jessicadall.com/2012/07/03/why-you-need-to-pay-your-ghostwriter/#comment-474</link>
		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Ghost Writer]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 08 Aug 2012 08:26:57 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[Thanks for the article about paying to Ghost writers. I reall like your blog.]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Thanks for the article about paying to Ghost writers. I reall like your blog.</p>
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		<title>Comment on Novel Blogs by landofkuro</title>
		<link>http://jessicadall.com/2012/04/05/novel-blogs/#comment-473</link>
		<dc:creator><![CDATA[landofkuro]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 07 Aug 2012 11:08:33 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[I am doing exactly this right now, and putting the first few chapters of my WIP out there to &quot;whet the appetites&quot; as they say. I wonder if the key here is that &quot;the novel in its entirety&quot;, never materializes. If only a handful of chapters appear are publishers fine with that?]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I am doing exactly this right now, and putting the first few chapters of my WIP out there to &#8220;whet the appetites&#8221; as they say. I wonder if the key here is that &#8220;the novel in its entirety&#8221;, never materializes. If only a handful of chapters appear are publishers fine with that?</p>
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		<title>Comment on &#8220;Hey look! I&#8217;m a writer!&#8221; Syndrome by Less is More &#171; The Jessica Dall Blog</title>
		<link>http://jessicadall.com/2012/02/13/hey-look-im-a-writer-syndrome/#comment-459</link>
		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Less is More &#171; The Jessica Dall Blog]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 17 Jul 2012 19:12:50 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[[...] can be just as bad as telling, however, (at least in my opinion) is melodrama. A bit like &#8220;Hey look! I&#8217;m a writer!&#8221; Syndrome, melodrama often comes when authors try too hard to show during emotional [...]]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>[...] can be just as bad as telling, however, (at least in my opinion) is melodrama. A bit like &#8220;Hey look! I&#8217;m a writer!&#8221; Syndrome, melodrama often comes when authors try too hard to show during emotional [...]</p>
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		<title>Comment on War on Was by Less is More &#171; The Jessica Dall Blog</title>
		<link>http://jessicadall.com/2012/02/16/war-on-was/#comment-458</link>
		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Less is More &#171; The Jessica Dall Blog]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 17 Jul 2012 19:12:47 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[[...] tell&#8221; has become nearly cliché when it comes to tips you&#8217;re likely to find. As I&#8217;ve said before, you don&#8217;t have to be on a witch hunt for &#8220;to be&#8221; verbs (a common symptom of [...]]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>[...] tell&#8221; has become nearly cliché when it comes to tips you&#8217;re likely to find. As I&#8217;ve said before, you don&#8217;t have to be on a witch hunt for &#8220;to be&#8221; verbs (a common symptom of [...]</p>
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